‘Beehive’ A Poem by Sophia Chawala

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*Beehive

Come lay your eyes on my beehive

See the poof of hairspray swarmin’ around my hair

Watch me ride high on daisies without a care

Like a bee mumblin’ its bumblin’ jive

 

Each day I leap in the air to stride

Like a blue flame strugglin’ to strike a flair

Reach inside, untangle my hairdo if you dare

Come lay your eyes on my beehive…

 

My worries grow a mile wide, as they nest inside my mind

Stings pierce my brain, poison strikes me bear

So I inflate my every care, like how I blow up my hair

Catch me and my insecurities live…

 

Come lay your eyes on my beehive

Every day there’s horror buzzing in my ears

So I straighten, blow-dry and hairspray my fears

Into a canopy so sky-high—I go blind.

 

The thrill that I wish to find, that my hair will flow freely by

With every rush and thrust of the air

But I am stiff with a dare: will I ever get out of hair

Of the damaged split-ends of my disguise?

 

…Come lay your eyes on my beehive…

 

*This poem is based on the popular 60’s beehive hairdo.

 

 

 

How Much Reliable Internet Videos and Postings Are? By Fayyaz A. Sheikh

Internet is full of websites with all kind of true and untrue material, assertions and conspiracy theories. When dealing with facts (not opinions), it is difficult to sort out what is true or false. That is the question and dilemma we, as editors, also face. In my judgment: 

Videos;

1-      In individual or panel discussions, only fact the videos prove is that particular person made particular assertions, but it does not automatically prove that those assertions are true. One still need documented references and cross references to prove that those assertions are true. Presence of a famous personality or personalities does not make the whole discussion kosher. It may elevate the level of discussion, but it still requires the same proof.

2-      Sometime after discussions, some participants retract their statements and some are challenged later with proof, and most of the time these are not included in original videos.

3-      Videos, which lack accepted back up references, cannot support another factual assertion which is also lacking such backup references.

Internet Postings;

Reliable internet postings have the same criteria as mainstream reliable print media. If a view-point is presented as fact, it should be supported by a reliable sources and references. Whether the writer is a rookie or an iconic journalist, the rules and requirements are the same. If someone writes a story and asserts that this story has many versions, but picks one version to write, then he/she has the obligation to explain why this version was chosen-and whether it was corroborated with other sources, otherwise it does not carry the water of being a reliable story.

We received an e-mail about Iqbal’s family tree with the link:

 ‘http://www.kahopakistan.com/pic/images/53261062767383433196.jpg

I think this belongs to the same trash can as any un-supported video or internet posting. The link refers to Kaho Pakistan Website, not to a text-book pdf. Again this posting itself does not prove that it is from a text-book or there is a cover up. It requires more proof to make that leap of faith. If it is from a textbook, it is fabrication and we should write to the author and Department of Education, Pakistan.

When we are challenging a well-documented (by both Eastern and Western Scholars) historic fact, the challenge should be supported by the equally or better documented and well researched document. I do not think un-supported internet videos or internet postings are the answer!

What kind of TFUSA website we should develop for the future? Whether we should have open format with no restrictions on true or untrue postings, and let the readers fight it out while sorting it out, or develop a well-accepted criteria of reliable material postings, so that TFUSA website is perceived as trustworthy and reliable. This is not an easy job for editors who will be making sometime controversial judgment calls. Should the editors nudge the discussion to stay on topic and prevent personal back and forth between participants, or let it go even if it is not contributing to a meaningful discussion?

The Editorial Board and Board of Directors will be deliberating on this in the next few weeks. I think you should weigh in with your opinion, after all TFUSA belongs to all of us.

Fayyaz A. Sheikh

 

 

‘ We The Liberals – Confused or Hypocrite?’ By Fayyaz A. Sheikh

We The Liberals, Confused or Hypocrite?

Recent discussion on alleged conversion of Allama Iqbal from Qadiyani to Sunni Muslim for personal gains,  gave me a pause to reflect on the liberals’ high-minded view of themselves and the their scorn often thrown at the conservatives and orthodox for being close minded and lack of  analytical thinking. Believe or not, I consider myself a liberal. I think when convenient, we liberals also become close minded and ignore independent and rational analysis, because it serves our agenda or ideology. This is true at international, national and local level.

At international level, in Egypt, Muslim Brotherhood won presidential elections fairly. But liberals, who speak very highly of democracy, now are siding with generals to subvert the democratic process. They were protesting the meeting of Hillary Clinton with President Morsi, a democratically elected president. One can understand liberal’s concern of imposition of Sharia,   but as liberal, we should try to prevent it within a democratic process. After all democracy is the highest priority. Now very conveniently we are throwing away this higher goal and are siding with dictators because we lost election and democracy does not serve us well. In a democratic process, voters have the right to have a government of their choosing. Liberals are trying to say that forget about what the majority is saying, only we know what is good for you!  A short sighted and close minded view!

The trouble with us is that we talk a lot, we do not have convictions and we do not put every effort towards achieving the goals. Again this is true at local, national and international level. Muslim Brotherhood won because they were organized, they had convictions and put every effort in convincing the people to vote for them. Liberals did not do any one of that. In order to prevent Sharia becoming a law, in a democratic process, we have to work hard, organize and convince the people to vote for us. But we do not want to do the hard work, so we abandoned democratic principle, and sided with generals. How it will achieve the goal of Democracy?

Mr. Obama, hero of liberals, doubled down on Mr. Bush’s policies both abroad and at home. He did not supported democratic movements where it did not serve America’s interests (Bahrain), and continues to support allied dictators but is calling for democratic change in non-allied regimes. At home, the Gautama Bay is still open, more restrictive clauses have been added to Patriotic act and breach of individual privacy is no longer a concern. The most troubling aspect of all of this is that most of the Democratic Party is dead silent because Mr. Obama is one of their own. If it was a Republican President, the Democrats would have shouted at full throttle.

At a local Muslim community level, most of the Islamic Centers/ Mosques are run and managed by conservatives, and Islamic Centers are the only infrastructure for all the Muslims in this country. If any social change is needed, it has to come from these Islamic Centers. For any successful change to occur, both at local and international level, the conservatives have to be part of the equation and discussion. Excluding them from such equation, does not isolate them, but it isolates us-and that is a self-defeating proposition.

Even though conservatives are in minority, but they still control most of the Islamic Centers. It is because they are very committed and give lot of personal time as compared to liberals. Apart from providing services for religious teachings, on all religious and other occasions, most of them arrive early at Islamic Centers to prepare the place for gathering, arrange for food and then stay late for after cleaning. Very few liberals are willing to devote this much time and effort, but we are very good at criticizing and talking.

On Pakistani Community level, we are analyzing the creation of Pakistan in a hindsight view, sometime fairly in a constructive manner and sometime unfairly. Some of the liberals, who do not agree with the creation of Pakistan, are not afraid to attack the personal lives of the Pakistani Movement Leaders. In the discussion on Iqbal, we disregarded reliable and well documented evidence and found whispers of conspiracy and loose talk trustworthy and presented it as truth, because it served our agenda and ideology. It is ironic that most of the liberals rightfully came to the defense of Abdus Salam, because Qadiyani connection has no relevance, but some liberals are using the same connection to discredit Iqbal.

Before the creation of Pakistan, there were highly respectable and esteemed political and religious leaders giving arguments for and against the creation of Pakistan. There was robust discussion. In my view, it was an honest discussion on both sides. The task of leaders in favor of the creation of the Pakistan was even more difficult because they were facing the opposition from some Muslim as well as Hindu leaders. Muhammad Ali Jinnah and his companions were successful because they were able to overcome this opposition and convince the public that the creation of Pakistan is the best solution. Looking in hindsight, analyzing it and suggesting how to improve the future, is a fair exercise, but character assassination and showing disrespect for the leaders is  destructive and unproductive. We say that we are trying to correct the history because there is a cover up, but very conveniently we muddy the waters of history when the true history is not to our liking.

I think liberals neither show due respect nor give due credit to their worthy opponents. This is a serious mistake. We have to give our due respect and deserved credit to them and try to understand their point of view, otherwise this high-minded approach will lead nowhere.

Fayyaz A. Sheikh

Honest DISHONESTY A Poem By Sophia Chawala

(This poem will be appreciated and enjoyed more by the young adults familiar with western  music) 

Honest DISHONESTY

Before reading this poem, I want to say how I exactly got the idea of writing such a mess in the first place.

These days, I am a sucker for abstract poetry, heavy-themed lyrics and dynamic prose. I especially hear a lot of these kinds of writing styles in the music I listen to. For example, Dream Theater, one of my all-time favorite bands, wrote a song named “Octavarium” , a 24-minute long score composed of five separate epics, all together conveying the message that everything, no matter how unrelated they may seem at first glance, is connected. And they painted this message so interestingly and wonderfully during the third epic “Full Circle.” Mike Portnoy, the drummer of Dream Theater, wrote this epic in a way so interesting that I couldn’t help to hopelessly attempt his style myself! He wrote the lyrics by making several underlying references to his favorite media and people. By mashing together random songs, bands, titles, lyrics, movies and actors, Portony creates an unusual, yet vivid story to his audience.

With my mind all shook up, I decided to use today’s most popular songs, singers, artists, bands and lyrics to whip up a mess, with faint hopes of finding a connection in the mix (I did make about 2 references that are from the 1960’s). After much crossing, erasing and gluing together of words, I managed to gain hope in Dream Theater’s theme about universal connection after all. As writers and thinkers, we all try to find connections to create new ideas and thoughts, but we must not be afraid of linking even the most uncommon things. Our minds think in a thousand words per minute, and within that very minute ideas link to other concepts and themes in a branch-like fashion, quickly creating a tree of thought. The problem behind that, however, is that we have trouble keeping up with how ideas follow not only because we are unable to convey a thousand words per minute, but also because we are afraid of making a mess, of being wrong.  But being wrong could be our very key of being original. We just need not be afraid of playing in the mud.

It’s easier said than done to be fearless of the strange, the weird and the wrong. I have a lot of fear to conquer myself. Nevertheless, I do hope that you enjoy my little mess that I made and I do hope you can mop away the grime in your own way to uncover your own, clean interpretation.

 

**Please keep in mind to read the references and underlying themes during or after the poem to help aid your quest in interpretation.

Honest DISHONESTY

Somewhere over the rainbow of my teenage dream

I usher Taylor to make me swift

On the floor, P!nk firework, a bad romance

Me & Mr. Jones

Rolling in the deep of last Friday night

You make me feel so F**kin’ perfect

Judas, will you hold it against me

The government hooker’s poker face?

 

Vanishing light of my pride

A lost soul, unclear scene

All-time low on such a high

Honesty dishonesty

 

There’s marina and the diamonds

Coldplaying in the pitbull

Maroon gonna take 5 now, lady anatabellum

At the payphone, call me maybe

Tell me now, where’s the lady

Gaga, love’s a battlefield

Oh na na what’s my name again?

 

Vanishing light of my pride

A lost soul, unclear scene

All-time low on such a high

Honesty dishonesty

 

Someone like you I need you

Now party rock on the straships

We R who We R, J fLO Rida, I go back to

Black eyed peas, I’m wide awake

Blow me one last kiss ho

Hey hey, yeah, yeah

Yeah baby I was born this way!

 

Vanishing light of my pride

A lost soul, unclear scene

All-time low on such a high

Honesty dishonesty

References made in poem (in order by stanza)

  • “Somewhere over the Rainbow” ~by Israel “IZ” Kamakawiwo’ole
  • “Teenage Dream” ~by Katy Perry
  • Usher (singer)
  • Taylor Swift (singer)
  • “On the Floor” ~by Jennifer Lopez
  • P!NK (singer)
  • “Firework” ~by Katty Perry
  • “Bad Romance” ~by Lady Gaga
  • “Me & Mr. Jones” ~by Amy Winehouse
  • “Rolling in the Deep” ~by Adele
  • “Last Friday Night” (T.G.I.F.) ~by Katy Perry
  • “You Make Me Feel” ~by Cobra Starship
  • “F**kin’  Perfect” ~by P!NK
  • “Judas” ~by Lady Gaga
  • “(Will You) Hold it against me” ~by Britney Spears
  • “Government Hooker” ~by Lady Gaga
  • “Poker Face” ~by Lady Gaga
  • Marina & the Diamonds (band)
  • Coldplay (band)
  • Pitbull (singer)
  • Maroon 5 (band)
  • “Take 5” ~Classical Jazz number by Paul Desmond
  • Lady Antebellum (singer)
  • “Payphone” ~by Maroon 5
  • “Call Me maybe?” ~by Carly Rae Jepsen
  • “Lady” ~by Kenny Rogers
  • Lady Gaga (singer)
  • “(Love is a) Battlefield” ~by Jordan Sparks (or Pat Benatar depending on which title you hold close to)
  • “(Oh Na Na ) What’s My Name” ~by Rihanna
  • “Someone Like You” ~by Adele
  • “I Need you Now” ~by Lady Antebellum
  • “Party Rock” ~by LMFAO
  • “Starships” ~by Nikki Manaj
  • “We R Who We R” ~by Ke$ha
  • J-LO (short for Jennifer Lopez)
  • Flo Rida (singer)
  • “(I Go) Back to Black” ~by Amy Winehouse
  • Black Eyed Peas (band)
  • “Wide Awake” ~by Katy Perry
  • “Blow Me (One Last Kiss)” ~by P!NK
  • “Ho Hey!” ~by The Lumineers
  • “Yeah” (x3) ~by Chris Brown
  • “(Baby I Was) Born This Way” ~by Lady Gaga

A NOTE ON COLORS:

The three colors that are referenced in this poem (aided by band names and singers) is pink (P!NK), maroon (Maroon 5) and black (Black Eyed Peas). If you darken pink enough on the spectrum, it turns maroon. If you darken maroon enough, it will turn black. And all colors at their brightest and darkest are black and white in the end.

Sophia Chawala